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Nice one :D

BeefourMusic responds:

Full version now up on NG! :D

Nice energy this song keeps, i love it, nice work!

Very interesting song VI, Very interesting, nice work!

Intro starts out very loud n fast with drums, then you cut the drums and put only kicks, why not starting with not drums, then only kicks then kicks and hats? this way it's far more smooth and increases the interest to what is next, Basically your intro lacks into some variety and automations, everything starts at the same time, the melody is very basic, lacks on some good bassline. Song structure needs muuuuuuuch work, the sounds you used for the drums are really basic, for the melody it doesn't really matter but could do lot better. Overall i would say that's a nice try but you have to work more to get a better result, you have nice ideas but just don't know how to use your skills right, i think you can do way better than this! Nice try, i am not going to underrate this to give you some influence to your new pieces.

Cerzak responds:

thanks for the review, first real helpful one ive ever got, ill follow your suggestions, thanks

Intro starts very roughly it has to be smoother, i did not like the instruments you used for the drums and the drumbeats, they would need a lot of help. The simplicity of the melodies is also bad, could use much more variety on the notes,, now when it gets to 1:36 part it sounds amazing although i would like to see some change to the instrument of the main melody there for example on the first part at 1:36 it should be like that it's very good but then change the instrument to something else for example because it sounds like a destroyed electric guitar or something which gives it a bad sound quality. Also you have to work on the finale, try some basic fade out effects some epic-finale-drum beat etc. Also since you classified this as techno the beat should be something like Kick Hat Clap Hat or something this beat doesn't give any techno feel. Apart from all those notices one last thing, you have to work more on the Song Structure, that's your weakness i believe, you should try making your song with an INTRO ... MAIN PART ... OUTRO (FINALE) and make it more variable and less boring. Overall the song sounds pretty good, nice work, the previous version was better, and Nexus 1 was Much better, but this one is not bad either, you just have to try some more! Good Luck

Aphyrmehrius responds:

Thanks For The Honnest review :)

The word EPIC is not enough to describe this!

Aphyrmehrius responds:

Thanks Mate Really Happy to hear that =)

Great =)

Definitely a 5 star rating, that's pretty good!

Aphyrmehrius responds:

Thanks Teo great to hear that :)

Nice work :D

Aphyrmehrius responds:

Thanks :D !!!

Really nice work, i think the bass seems a little monotone, could use some more variety, but the whole thing is awesome!

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