TastyTeo's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ocean Base Zone Proto]

The one you uplaoded before was much better this is bad for my ears lol, the bass is epic though. it is just that synth destroying the song and where is the beat? rating 3 just for the bassline

And again nice try, don't rush!

NGKFlower responds:

thanks. i appreciate it

[Ocean Base Zone Beta]

Veeeeeeery repetitive and boring intro but when you throw the beat in everything seems better, well don't rush to upload your stuff mate work more on each project you have. and again nice try!

NGKFlower responds:

thanks. the ocean base zones are really old pieces of mine but i did wanted to post something, i appreciate the advice, i'll keep in mind

[Distant]

Wonderfully done, well it just keeps reminding me basshunter so i would classify it as a EuroDance song, or techno... nice work

Xsalvaz responds:

Thank you very much! It does remind me of basshunter too, which is why I like it. haha
~X

[Work in progress]

This is relaxing my Soul ^_^ nice work Soulie :P

SoulofT responds:

lol thanks DJTheof :D

[Digital Insanity!]

Very Basic Samples (DRUMS) and Very Little effects, but i remember this awesome ass kicking music on every trainer / hack / patch i used to download and you did some good work replicating it, even if it was a midi still nice try at least you did not destroy it ^_^ That's good

The choices of the synths were great and really close to the original

You just got a review from somebody who actually has listened to this in the past ;)
by the way you could try finding some Razor1911 music files, this Red Faction Guerilla one is awesome why don't you try doing it next? :D

ChasingPresence responds:

Haha yeah, I made this a long time ago and recently decided to make it better. I recently bought Komplete 8 from native instruments so expect to be hearing a lot better things from me! :D

[Hypnophobia]

That's a nice piece... i was just wondering, are you afraid of sleeping?

TheComet responds:

I more or less despise sleep because I could be doing so many productive things during the time spent asleep.

Also insomnia, not so fun.

[Arman§Dragon]

Nice try

armandragon responds:

Thanks :)

[Fore Way [DRad]]

Seems to be a good track for starters, ( I wasn't better, if you want check out my first song it's called sandstorm of space)

The suggestions i would give you is to make those kicks pump more, add effects on them, try to add reeverb on most of the percussion it makes them sound more realistic and really gives a better feeling to the whole song. You could have used some samples or edit some of your of course that could actually sound better / clean / professional,

I guess you got a little messy with the question "How do i expand all these stuff?" and you tried to add variations which ... to be honest .. were not good and kind of downed the song a little bit. You need to improve the structure, some automations should be everywhere along with effects (and i mean wav effects or some synths you can create on synthesizers). Be sure to make a good song intro, don't make it boring don't make it last long and develop it smart and quick.

There is no particular structure, EVERY artist develops his own unique style, you have to develop your own structure, what you prefer? just be sure to keep and intro and an outro, the main body is all yours, what will you do? add effects? new insruments coming in? small parts with synths and solos? you know that better than me

As for the mastering, well you should check out some mastering tutorials on youtube obviously, its nothing more than limiting the volume of your instruments, it is not that hard just be sure not to exceed 0DB..

Overall you need more inspiration and clean thoughts, you can do it, and i would encourage you to create more stuff, i hope i have helped you,

Sorry if i was boring, and it is just my opinion
Cheers
DJ Theof

By the way on your review on my Mystery song i am not being BAD or something in any way
Enjoy!

DRadDaDanDawg responds:

Yeah thanks a lot, and its silly because I've already done basically all that on my next upcoming song, so it should be better haha

Thanks for the advice :)

[Magic]

Tragic.,.. i mean magic xD nice work! :D

armandragon responds:

Thanks :D

[Dream Girl from Fantasy]

You Are Epic :D

EuphoriaSound responds:

Hehe ;D I have another version on youtube just with Another melody. It's called EuphoriaSound - Rave Girl