TastyTeo's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[When Magic Overtakes]

Very good, you shall continuue this, no repetitive feeling at all, the melody is awesome and the synth behind it is awesome with that portamento/sliding thing, also the beat starts nicely with solo claps, the only thing i did not like it shte bass, where is the bassline? some offbeat bass would make the song KILLER :DDD 0:46 i mean look how empty it sounds, add some offbeat bass there it will sound so beautiful!

I just loved the whole thing!

Vee responds:

:D thanks so much! i think i'll try to edit it and then re-upload it with offbeat bass in it.
Thank you for your review :)

[The Source of Art]

Seems pretty relaxing :D nice work both of you

armandragon responds:

Thanks Mate :D !!!!!!

[Raving in the Rain]

You are pro !!!!!!!

ChasingPresence responds:

Thank you bro! You're pretty pro too :D

[Midnight Watcher]

Gives a nice, dark feeling :D that's pretty good. My only complaint is that you use very default/basic drums. almost on all of your songs. i know it's difficult to create unique ones but what about some new pack or something? just saying, it was really good overall!

DESHIEL responds:

I just like them THAT much :D

[DJ Stefi - Light Ray 2012]

Nice one stefan :D you have long way though, you need to fix your structure, and produce more and more, try to create melodies and practice by replicating other songs. The issues to this song were obviously many but i can't be very specific as you are new to music

In very general words, you need to fix those
-Song Structure (Try something like INTRO, MAIN PART, BREAK DOWN, MAIN PART, OUTRO)
-Song is very repetitive, add new chords/synths/melodies etc
-Song needs better automations, in some parts the resonance filter is very loud you need to invert the Frequency with the Resonance, it's a nice trick and if Frequency is 100 then resonance should be 0, if freq = 30 then res = 70 etc...
-You need to learn mastering your songs, in other words, balancing all the audio for a better sound, we usually do this by adding a limiter on the master filter, compressors on each instrument, and reduce the volume in order to fit every melody and not make it loud, the beat should mostly louder than the melodies, etc so basically CLEAN UP

I hope you will understand my tips as your english is not good xD but you will learn lots of stuff just keep making songs

DjStefi responds:

hahaha :D Okay, thanks you for comment, I hope to get better and better :)