That's really great!! You are improving!
That's really great!! You are improving!
Thanks man!
Actually it's very good :D and you create really awesome stuff the only thing i did not like is the way you joined the two melodies. but else it is just fine, it is not wrong in any way i just don't like it, that's a personal taste, The structure seems pretty solid, the part at 1:26 is pretty awesome and you have added lots of stuff, variety is a big step into techno. It;s a very nice piece again, the only thing I did not like is the way you mixed the melodies :P
Yeah I know I kinda screwed up the joining of two melodies but what's done it's done :D
For one of your first, you started really pumpy and energetic! I really like your music! The variations on the melody are just amazing and the vocals give a random feeling to the song, and this is not a bad thing i totally disagree with the guy below me, just keep it up. For one of your first it's really powerful!
:) Thanks Tasty!
nice chords :D nice song overall you should have expanded it
thank you, I worked extra hard on it! :DDD
Really nice effort, you should improve your mastering techniques though but you are really improving ^_^ for example that intro sound could be more awesome if it was a saw lead ^_^
Thank you! I will use your tips with my next song!
Nice :D
Thanks =)))))))))
NIce :D
Thanks =)))) its wonderfull xD
Ouch hehe it's your first song but well you should have added at least a basic structure of a song ^_^ add some rhythm it seemed more like effects and stuff rather than melody and rhythm...If you are trying to make something good and very basic that would be the structure
-Intro
-Main Part
-Outro
And you should include those basic things to these parts:
-Melody
-Bassline
-Beat
Try listening to some song that inspires you can do it with a different melody on the same structure or something, but still nice try for the first
Yes , i will try it next time , thanks for the review
No Father... I won't be fixing any bass you have to do it yourself in order to learn :D
But i dont know how... There are so many flippity doo dahs, knobs, levers and buttons that ma head hurts...
Nice job :D!
Thank you :D
I Produce music on FL Studio since 2010 my new newgrounds account is SpeTheof, see you there!
Age 27, Male
Music Production
Greece
Joined on 4/2/09